Wednesday, April 3, 2013

Nemo




As Dory approached  Marlin who was in a grumpy mood , under the deep blue seas, she said “Hey Mr Grumpy Gills. When life gets you down, you know what you gotta do?” Marlin grounched and replied  “ I don’t want to know what you gotta do” .  
“ Sorry “. whispered Dory.


Dory  screamed,  happily singing outta tune "Just keep swimming, just keep swimming,  just keep swimming, swimming, swimming What do we do? We swim swim”

Mariln exclaimed “  Dory, No singing “

Dory grabbed Marlin’s fin and swam down into the deep “ I love to swim. When you want to swim”
As they disappeared into the depths Marlin yelled “ See I’m gonna get stuck now with that song now it’s in my head”

2 comments:

  1. Hey Logan
    Nice story there. WOW! great photo to keep up the good work but next time double check your spaces and your speech marks. Cant wait until your next post.

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  2. Great post Logan I love the detail and action around your speech I can see the whole thing in the back of my head you really painted that picture for me well. Keep up the good post

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