The flag that I have drawn represents me.

The paragraph in red is the one that has been marked by Alexandria and she gave me
9 out of 12


Room 17 needs a courtyard makeover immediately.

In winter it gets crowed on the hard courts ,then fights
and argument starts and little kids get hurt.There is no room to play
because there is more children in our school now.

Room 17’s courtyard is a waste of space.Our courtyard is, a waste
because not much kids use it. It gets treated like a trash bag.
Which is not good at all.

Unfortunately, our courtyard is not a cool place.It is not a very cool place to hang out with your friends.Our courtyard is boring too ugly and not cool or awesome at all.

Room 17 needs an extreme courtyard make over and fast.