VOLCANOES

 A volcanoes erupts when pressure is on the magma chamber that cause the magma to rise with gas, rock and ash. It rise out of the chamber comes out then it is call lava the spreads out it keeps come out the ounce it has, many layers the volcano is shaped like a hill or mountain.

 Active volcanoes are mostly around the tectonic planets here is photo where some active volcanoes are.


One of the volcanoes that are active in New Zealand  is called Mt Tongariro.

Stomach Churning

There was an awesome fun park that had it’s grand open and it was a night . It said on the flyer that the school handed out before we went off to the school holidays.

At the fun park there was a roller coaster that this boy and his friends really wanted to go on , there was a ferris wheel and many more cool rides that you would have lots of fun on.

When they were going to there first ride which was the roller coaster. When they approached the roller coaster there stomach were churning , they also had butterfly in their stomach as well.

After they went on the roller coaster they felt a bit weird. After they had a great day at the fun park they wished that they could do that again next holidays.

Thanks to Stevie for editing my work.

Smoking Not My Future

This is my argument why smoking is not great. Smoking is dangerous it can cause a disease inside your body.  

If you smoke there is an increase of getting a disease . Smokes cause a disease in your body that can make you die. Smoking can cause you get heart disease which is common. There is another disease that is common as well, that disease is called lung-cancer.

Twenty percent of Americans are smokers and most of them are likely to die from that. If you have been smoking you are more likely to die from chemicals in the cigarettes that could affect your body.


I have told you in my writing what smokes do to your body. They don’t make you great, they make you worse. So think before your make the wrong choice.

Thanks to evin for helping me editing my work (=