Friday, September 28, 2012

Stomach Churning



There was an awesome fun park that had it’s grand open and it was a night . It said on the flyer that the school handed out before we went off to the school holidays.

At the fun park there was a roller coaster that this boy and his friends really wanted to go on , there was a ferris wheel and many more cool rides that you would have lots of fun on.

When they were going to there first ride which was the roller coaster. When they approached the roller coaster there stomach were churning , they also had butterfly in their stomach as well.

After they went on the roller coaster they felt a bit weird. After they had a great day at the fun park they wished that they could do that again next holidays.


Thanks to Stevie for editing my work.

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